THE YOUNG SOPRANOS PART 3 "SU VIA PACEM -- PARA BELLUM"
THE
YOUNG SOPRANOS
PART 3
"SU VIA PACEM -- PARA BELLUM"
To put it bluntly I am dissatisfied with beginning of Part 3 so I took it down to revise.
The issues I am having with the beginning is the lapse in the 15 hour timeline from Tuesday 6/12 at 9PM until Wednesday 6/13 at 12 noon.
From the moment that Rosale interupted her daughter Kelli Aprile & A.J. Soprano having sex in the back of the funeral home tour bus until the two simultaneous silver coffin Funerals at 12 Noon the following day.
Where Corrado's silver coffin (with Bobbi's Ashes) delivered to St Stephen Catholic Church & The second empty silver casket is delivered to St Lucy's Catholic Church in Newark's Little Italy with the Urn of ashes of Ercoles D'Agostino. (Junior &Johnny-Boy's brother who died in a County Home in 1986) Which A.J. discovered when he had Junior's house emptied & put into storage for safe-keeping.
There are many more questions that have gone unasked or unanswered. I had initially intented to fill in the missing events within that lapse throughout the present & future storyboard.
I hope this is a sufficient explanation for the Temporary Orange Barrels!
Thank you all once more for following & reading.
(Please Note: There is no cost or obligations associated with this creative writing project.
I would only ask for any feedback concerning the text & the translations of our global audience.)
J. BECK
PART 2--XXXV /B
APPENDIX: Addressing the lapse in the timeline from Tuesday 6/12/2017 at 9PM until Wednesday 6/13/2017 at 12 noon.
https://youngsopranos.blogspot.com/2024/08/the-young-soprano-part-2-xxxvb-appendix.html?m=1
(This will read like short story w/15 revealing key points)
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